Wednesday 17 November 2010

Animatic feedback notes 17th Nov

Feedback from the Animatic showing 17th Nov;

#Make the ending of the film longer at the moment it is a little short, show the relief/happiness on the animals faces as they have escaped, also show more of the jungle.

#make the asteroid scene a little punchier doesnt need to be as long.

#show more interaction between the charachters, after the food comes in the jail scene, show them eating /chewing the food perhaps, play on the fact they are bored/unhappy in the cell and repeat their daily routine.